For my final writing project, I want to base my
transformations off of the scholarly article Relationship Quality, Commitment, and Stability in Long-Distance
Relationships by Gretchen Kelmer, Galena K. Rhoades, Scott Stanley, and
Howard Markman. This article first establishes the factors of long distance
relationships and geographically close relationships. After the comparison of
the two, the article proposes the hypotheses that would be tested, followed by
the methods and the discussion. While the article is a research paper, it can
still be transformed into other genres geared towards both an older and a
younger audience.
For a younger audience, I wanted to take into account the
constant use of technology and social media in our current generation. The
increasingly popular website, Buzzfeed, presents many articles and posts that
are relatable to the readers. Therefore, for my genre transformation, I want to
write a post that is titled “10 Signs You Know You’re in a Long Distance
Relationship.” I would include a short sentence in a bold font that briefly
summarizes the “sign” that shows you are in a long distance relationship. I
would then use a regular font to elaborate on it, and I would also include a
picture or .gif image that relates to the sign. The picture or visual will help
make the post more memorable and can often add humor to the post as well. I
would make sure the format of my wannabe-Buzzfeed post is similar to that of an
actual post. Therefore, I would include hyperlinks that allow readers to be
able to easily share the post, as publicity from the audience is an important
factor in the success of popular Buzzfeed posts. This post serves to remind the
audience that many people out there are in long distance relationships, and
there are many factors, often pros, that exist in long distance relationships
that do not exist in geographically close relationships.
I want to transform the article into a brochure for an older
audience. I’d imagine these brochures to be sitting by the front desk at some
office, waiting to be read. The brochure would be a type of self-help or
reevaluation for individuals in long distance relationships. It would introduce
by defining what a long-distance relationship is. I would provide the reasons
that long distance relationships exist. Listing a few reasons can give people
perspective that they are not alone in their situation, and that long distance
relationships exist for a variety of reasons. I would then list out benefits—based
on what the article says, because “challenges and deprivations that come with
long distance relationships may influence individuals to filter out less
satisfactory partners.” Benefits such as less difficulty sustaining positive
connections together, being able to more easily make the most of their time,
and having repeated honeymoon effects can remind the audience that they have
pros that close-proximity relationships do not necessarily have. The brochure
serves to lighten the mood of the struggling individual and to provide them
with hope. The brochure would contain possible problems that the couple may be
experiencing and how it can be tackled.
The two transformed genres are still based off of the same
content but are now executed in different manners. The genres are tailored
towards the age of the audience, taking into account how different generations
retain information differently. Since the younger audience is arguably more
technologically advanced and the older generation is slightly more used to concrete
paper, I decided to transform my scholarly article into a Buzzfeed post and
self-help brochure, respectively.
I think your topic interesting and your genres are relatable both to the academic article and the audiences. I'm confused if by younger audiences you mean people in the teens or twenties because lots of people can be wondering if they are in long distance relationship, especially in those age groups. I think the Buzzfeed post is a great idea and what I chose to transform my academic article into as well. The brochure is also a really creative idea because most people didn't really think of it. I know you say you think of it in office but I'm wondering what kind of office-business, psychological, medical, etc. I think when you question what kind of office you will be able to determine exactly what kind of audience the brochure is for such as an individual who is questing their relationship and seeking a psychologist for help. Your idea and the genres are really great, and you connect them well.
ReplyDeleteSo I am assuming your topic is going to be long-distance relationships? Totally cool topic and also very common in the world today. One question I have is for the younger audience is that if you are going to include a hyperlink will it lead somewhere? If it actually led somewhere it would be super cool because it would make your transformation even more like the real thing it is based on. For the older audience are you going to stylize your piece as a brochure that if printed out could actually be used as one? This could make your article even more realistic because if someone wanted they could print out and physically hold it. Another question I have is how the content of the brochure is going to be organized? Like are they going to be long paragraphs or lists or short paragraphs and short lists. Different types of organization can lead a reader to decide if they want to continue reading your article or not. A general question I have is how are you going to relate your two articles back to the original scholarly article? Is it going to a subtle relation or direct? I’m asking this because it could make writing the self-analysis somewhat easier
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ReplyDeleteMy initial thought to the idea of ““10 Signs You Know You’re in a Long Distance Relationship” is: don’t people already know when they’re in a long-distance relationship? I haven’t read the article, so maybe that’s something that the researchers tease out a bit, but it seems to me like “10 Ways to Cope With” or “10 Signs It’s Over” would be more… I dunno, realistic(?) pieces. Your good judgment has earned my trust, but please think about that before you settled on it. All the other ideas you expressed for why a Buzzfeed-y article makes sense for a younger (high school?) generation makes sense, so you’re golden on that front.
It sounds like you took that “coping” theme and are planning on applying it to adults/an adult genre, and I dig it. I don’t love the brochure idea to be honest with you, though… do people read brochures nowadays? I feel like that’s a lost/dying genre. If you’re thinking about a business setting with some sad sack upset about their incoming/recent breakup, where would this personally (more) realistically go for advice or for coping literature? (And would there really be these brochures sitting around an ordinary office? Prob not.)
Give these questions some thought, and don’t forget to think: what’s the ESSENCE of this scholarly piece? What are the big ideas? How can I bring it to life in these new genres?
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I like your topic because even though I have never been in a long distance relationship, I know many people struggle with this! However what age group are you trying to reach out to for the younger audience? The buzzfeed post is a great idea, but can a lot of young teens relate to the topic of long distance relationships? I like how you really thought about the conventions that you will include in your post and I love the idea of attaching hyperlinks! Will they actually link to an image or website? I think the brochure is an "okay" idea but nothing spectacular. Would you have fun creating this? Also, if an older person was sitting in a doctor's office, would the first thing they would want to pick up be a brochure? Think about these things! I'm sure you can think of a better genre, or just make a really eye-catching brochure!
ReplyDeleteHey, Flora! I think you have chosen a great topic that can be well translated for both a younger and older audience. I am an avid reader of Buzzfeed content, and I always see those “14 Signs You Went to An All Girls School” or “20 Signs You Are a 90s Kid” posts, where the purpose is not to educate or inform people, but to list (often accompanied by gifs or pictures) specific things that only people who have experienced these circumstances would understand. Basically, it is a post that is meant to be relatable. I am looking forward to seeing how you go about making your “wannabe-Buzzfeed post”! For your genre geared towards an older audience, I really like how you set the scene for the reader in terms of what you were imagining: a brochure you might find “sitting by the front desk at some office, waiting to be read.” I could potentially see a brochure like this sitting in maybe a relationship/marriage counselor’s office. Overall, you were pretty specific about your plan and what your vision for this project is; good luck!
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